((Cleared out of the way, see Gathering.))
Where is this falling within the continuity? I assume from the text that it happens before your rightous forces are banded together.Everything's good so far, do you need anything from the rest of us for information, plot points, or resources? Is there anything I should make sure carries over to my own parts when writing scenes with you in them?
this will fall in the 'gathering' sequence of events ... jade will be the last team member that stasis will call, leaving room for him to wax philosophical about life, death and the state of his uniform.i'll be quiet now.
Yeah, what she said. ;)I think I'm mostly playing this by ear. Go ahead and write what needs to be written, and if character continuity needs to be tweaked I'll give the appropriate person a shout.
grin. is this the point where i say you've got cute ears?okay, okay! really. i'll be quiet now.
well, if that's the case, then obviously the end needs changing. it's more likely by the time he gets to her, the group will be together, anxious to go.and by "wax philosophical", you mean "lay on the floor semiconscious", right?
well, is two ways to go about it i think - one is that yes, she knows and you know where to be and it is absolutely in character for her to go there before calling you. for one thing, its a place of strength and she needs all of it when dealing with you.however, it is certainly possible that she simply remains on the school grounds and just finds a high point to call you. if that is the case than yes, after you've concluded the private conversation, you and her can meet up with the rest of the assemb(ling) team. time frames are varied and whatever works for you, works for me. for personal reasons, i like the IP tower but its not set in stone.
Whichever works best, honestly. Just lemme know and I'll tweak and tinker to accomodate the decision.
i know why you like it, i do. however, the timeline doesn't seem like it has the room for it. does that make sense?if jade is the last person you call, then it implies that at some point stasis is going to ask detective, barier, not to mention arrow wraith-- to hold their horses for a bit while she vaults off to IP.
truth. sorry Jade, i think we're gonna have to move it to the school grounds. pick a nice high clock tower or something. even the roof of the quad if you like.
huh. i shall read over lunch Jade! with your permission, after this latest update, i'm going to pull it into its proper place in sequence and start adding my own edits, additions and smoothings. please advise at earliest convenience if you are emotionally ready for that.
Fire at will!
brave, brave Rooster.